All Comments on 'Corset'

... but the title and subject matter attracted me. And you delivered. More than two years after you posted it, I voted '5'. Hope the vote sticks.

I liked what I read; I have dom tendencies, and a woman in a narrow-waist corset is a turn-on for me, for many reasons. It's a fantasy of mine to see my woman in a corset, but it's one of the few things she says 'no' to.

Think you can get with a musician, and turn this into a song? The recurring phrases almost demand it. If you do, try posting it as an audio file on Literotica -- I, for one, would appreciate it.

For your awesome comment. I actually have some sort of irrational fear of hearing my stuff out loud so I probably won't do an audio file. Thank you for enjoying my poetry though. It does my soul well :)