All Comments on 'Brian and Ballet Pt. 02'

Loving the pace of the story although I do wish it had more then one page!!

I truely have enjoyed this story. I love these character and can't wait for more. The second story took way to long to get here. Please make them come faster.

I agree, they need to be longer, and I'm working on it. I wanted this part to be longer, however due to the busy holiday schedule finding time to write has been a challenge, and I decided to put this out just to give another taste before the next part. My free time should be increasing after the holidays and I should be able to put out a lot more content a bit faster. Thank you for your patience, and Merry Christmas!

D.S.

Enjoying the pace and the characters thus far - thanks for sharing it!

Keep them comming DS...I was wishing for it to be a few pages...but thanks all the same.

The story line is most enjoyable. Keep up the good work, it is appreciated!

It seems like the only real criticism is the length and frequency, not bad. If I were a full time writer it would be easier, but sadly there are bills to be paid (and that's something I just can't say "fuck it!" to) For those that are enjoying the story thus far the next segment will probably be submitted sometime later on this week, and the plot really picks up. I look forward hearing from you all!

D.S.

This story grasps the romance as well as a great story line few and far between stories have had me on my seat wanting more thank you and I look forward to your next installment

i cant wait this story is amazing

... LONGEEEEEEEEER ! Make it at the VERY least 3 full literotica pages per episode ! And a LOT of episodes through many days, weeks, ... ! I really did mean this story could be like a series !