My Rude Roommate

loved it

write more

Nice

Keep the non-concent theme but get into it more. Develope it, make it longer. You have a good thing going.

I liked it is good has a nice feel, I like the idea of bobby sweating the law ,

, pushing the fabric of her lacy black panties partially into her cunt. My cock needed virtually no help in pulling these aside and right away I was inside her, right up to the hilt and pummelling her hard.

You might omit or change virtually it is not theright word.

I got there at a different reception. < I got there to a different reception.>

Loved this!

I really liked this! I hope you write more of it!