All Comments on 'My Rude Roommate'

by WelshSally

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
loved it

write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Nice

Keep the non-concent theme but get into it more. Develope it, make it longer. You have a good thing going.

CylonsexfiendCylonsexfiendabout 12 years ago

I liked it is good has a nice feel, I like the idea of bobby sweating the law ,

, pushing the fabric of her lacy black panties partially into her cunt. My cock needed virtually no help in pulling these aside and right away I was inside her, right up to the hilt and pummelling her hard.

You might omit or change virtually it is not theright word.

I got there at a different reception. < I got there to a different reception.>

LittleIrishDollyLittleIrishDollyabout 12 years ago
Loved this!

I really liked this! I hope you write more of it!

WelshSallyWelshSallyover 3 years agoAuthor
just back after a few years...

Not sure if anyone reads these stories beyond the first few days, Occurred to me I might be able to make this more of a series, where Bobby gets into the local goth / fetish / bondage scene with the local group of like minded girls. If anyone would like to see that, let me know and I'll try ot sort something out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Reply to welshsally

Naah, sounds to restrictive and samey, just keep switching characters

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