All Comments on 'Dancing with Kelly Ch. 02'

by GypsyGirl84

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Teacher44Teacher44over 12 years ago
A little short.

It was a very nice followup to the first chapter, but I thought it was a little short. I'm glad that you held off on actual sex between the two, as it wouldn't have been all that appropriate. However, if she was going to do anything else with him, I'd like to have seen all that resolved and end the chapter with them going to sleep, so that chapter 3 (assuming there will be one) would start with the next morning.

wifeofmasonwifeofmasonover 12 years ago

Needs to be longer, but I am loving the story. When can we expect more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent plotline

Really enjoyed this chapter. Looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More Please

Great story ! Can't wait for Chapter 3 !

pipeskiepipeskieover 12 years ago
amazing

absolutely amazing. i want to read more!

KittyBoundKittyBoundover 11 years ago

Definitely want more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great

Excellent, but I do not want to wait five years for part 3.

thebug37thebug37almost 9 years ago
Cry Uncle

It's not incest so what is the problem ? This is a delight to read so keep the story going.

thebug37thebug37over 8 years ago
Sorry but you went from a 5 to a 1 rating. Nothing to write but this title - you goofed this stroy

no words here

DOC226DOC226about 7 years ago
Too short and an abrupt end.

Ch. 2 of Dancing With Kelly ended abruptly, as if you (the author) had to go to a meeting and never came back to end the chapter. I know it has been a long time, but please consider finishing the story.

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Cock teaser to the 10th degree.

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