All Comments on 'The Fuck of My Life'

by Alex4

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soflabbwlvrsoflabbwlvrover 12 years ago
Good story

I would like to know a little more about these women beyond their stations, but otherwise a very stimulating read. Nicely done.

estragonestragonover 12 years ago
Good Writing

and hot sex. A great combination. Enough local colour to keep it interesting, without becoming a travelog. More!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More build up please

I would have like this story more if there was more build up

TigerladyandhimTigerladyandhimover 12 years ago
Enjoyable

Good story I would like to see a better build up with a bit of flirting but enjoyed

the story.

Some more in this line soon?

funwdifunwdiover 12 years ago
Great story

This is a great story, but then it just ends...part 2?

AlexandraAlexandraover 12 years ago
Hot

I loved this story, the deep need of the protagonist, the mystique of the exotic maid and her need. The emptiness of the phone call from the husband, gave the story a sense of tragedy. Their marriage isn't going to end well is it?

Wonderfully written, thank you

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