All Comments on 'The Virus'

wish i could be like her

Please write more parts of the story or other sotrys like this one i really love such storys

Very Hot, need more, there must be more parts to this, please write more

It's great please continue

A good idea; modern to a point, but there's too much emphasis on the stereotypes typically associated with this sort of writing. Go to the featured stories in this genre' and examine how they're written, then look at your own and see how you can make yours flow better.

The setting and background info for the story is very expansive but you turned it into an emotionless suck and fuck story. It would've been good if you turned it into a romance story and besides the fact is that even with the 'transsexual women' there are too few of them to be used as sex whores to the rest of the human race, isn't this about re-population not rebuilding a red light district?

I liked the story premise. I would have loved to hear more about the initial discovery of the drug, maybe the effect on a lab worker. And more about what happens to all the girls, both the cooperative and uncooperative.

I want this drug right now !!!! PLEASE !!!!!! Don't make me beg !!!!

Well written with an obviously quirky sense of humour! Keep it up.

Well done. You present a background fairly quickly, and give us a visceral story. I would like to see how she changes overtime. Showing more of the education could have helped, as well as some programming they would have gone through to show how they could come to accept their new forms. Good stuff though.

It is a bit like the White Plague by Frank Herbert. An obvious answer to the problem. Would like an expanded version as there is a lack of detail all round,

Reminds me of a Frank Herbert novel theme. I doubt if force would be needed and if they did they would select the finest genetic specimens. Oh, that sounds like something from a 1940's leader. Now who was that?

Have to agree with FallenAlfar's comment. The premise was good, but the execution was pretty dry, with hardly any emotional content.

I have been to the Oregon theater about 4yr ago when my wife was at of town