All Comments on 'Doc Ch. 25'

you are torturing us with these short chapters. love the story though

It's nice to see this series is still alive. Thanks.

I do enjoy your story telling.

Thanks for the next chapter can't wait for more keep up the great work and happpy new year

Great your back I love this story can't wait for more

I had wondered where you had gone. You have been missed. Your tale in this setting is among the best. Yes, there are some typo's and grammar errors, but overall your story is top-shelf. I cannot wait to see what occurs next. Write On!

This story leaves me wanting to keep reading MORE! Keep up this great story!

Missed this story. Can't wait for more.

To many times I would get interested in a story then it never got finished.

It's been so long since the last post I had to go back to refresh the story in me mind, please post some more soon

Please continue to write this story. Thanks, Freddie

Well are you?

This is a great story. I have enjoyed it very much. Please give us more. You are very talented.

hi

i so love your writing man you good with it too.

thanks for posting and i hope you could write more....

any how thanks for the really enjoyable read.

The Story is very entertaining, but so much time was spent on the conversion of the two wagons. Then very little was said about the actual use of them. Also the cast has never been removed from Running Deer's arm. Please follow up and get us familiar with the other towns as well. Looking forward to the continuation of the story.

You know you can't just leave us hanging, we got to have more. This new time line branch has so many possibilities. I mean did Wounded Knee even happen? It would have been better had it not. And all those kids have got to grow up what did they do?

When they found the camp there was 23 renegades and 8 outlaws then they killed 2 guards. But when the reinforcements came from silver city there was over 40 bad guys? That math doesn't add up

Springs are great for bouncing over bumps, but for a smooth ride don't forget shock absorbers. Or motion dampeners.