by RayStar
I like the story and look forward to the next chapter. I guess I like interacial stories, black women and white men and black men and white women. Keep up the good writing.
Great story, your main character (the wife) uses too much male vernacular i.e. Rack for breasts. other than that, i thought this was a very good beginning. keep up the great work!
The wife to slave angle appealed. I'm sure you have Chapter 2 in mind. If your black male gets the daughters, you'll lose this reader for sure.
Love this story line, and can't wait to read further developments.