All Comments on 'My Adventure'

by RayStar

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I like the story and look forward to the next chapter. I guess I like interacial stories, black women and white men and black men and white women. Keep up the good writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great story, hope there are sequels coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great story, your main character (the wife) uses too much male vernacular i.e. Rack for breasts. other than that, i thought this was a very good beginning. keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I don't usually read interracial stories....but

The wife to slave angle appealed. I'm sure you have Chapter 2 in mind. If your black male gets the daughters, you'll lose this reader for sure.

GettingItDoneGettingItDoneover 12 years ago
Great start

Love this story line, and can't wait to read further developments.

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