All Comments on 'Will I Regret It?'

I enjoyed your writing. Some of the extra information such as the room and music as well as the rouge being put over his parents add to this story. They allow a reader to take their thinking to similar life experiences.

First person is a tough writing style. This might have been more interesting as a third person.

Keep writing.

Good story, however even if she was willing it was almost as if he raped her.

He was a selfish little prick that needs his ass kicked.

Well I liked it and thought it was a great first story for this site and hopefully we will see more storys from you.

You write with an emotional intelligence that brings an added edge to your submissive depravity. I enjoy your writing tremendously. Very hot. Very arousing.

The good, the bad, the erotic sides of losing one's virginity. Thanks for sharing this honest account of your first time!