All Comments on 'Intrigued Ch. 12'

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Mermaid2189Mermaid2189over 12 years ago

yay keep them comming

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127over 12 years ago
Love it even though I wish it was longer

All I can say is WOW.... go Keegan, Hope your mom just thinks you're drunk.

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 12 years ago
Damn!

Short but hot, well done.

*****

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Wow

Such a turn around for these characters. Their roles are almost exactly reversed from the first chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
"Nobody's gonna touch, Howard P. Banks!"

Hilarious. I was never one for supernatural stories, but I really like your work. Please keep it up.

Mermaid2189Mermaid2189about 12 years ago

new chapter plz!!!!!

Mermaid2189Mermaid2189about 12 years ago

new chapter plz!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
OMG!!

Tht was very very hottt!!!!! Plz add more soon lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
So now he is an alpha male...

How typical...

TheMathias456TheMathias456almost 11 years ago
Great Hot Read

Now that puts the lust in blood lust, very nicely done !

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Anonymous 07/19/13

He was always an alpha male. Where have you been? Clearly not paying attention. How typical.

Anyways great story. Keep on writing!

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