All Comments on 'Never Forget'

But you have made me a fan of this story! Hope to see more soon.

Can't wait for chapter two! Please post as soon as you can!

please write d next chapter fast..

I can't wait to know what happens next... :)

I wish I knew a bit more about what Cody looks like or his dad. Heck I didn't even know he had a sister. Other than that though, I really like it. The age difference is interesting.

on he basis of good writing and a good story line. But how long must I wait for some erotic action? Next chapter coming when?

I hope you don't mind but I correct my son's spelling all the time and he's in his 40's. I'll continue if you wish.

I want to know what happens next, so in that respect it's a successful start. I'd say it needs a bit of fleshing out and editing. Please continue!

Suspense ....

Write more..?

Can't wait to see what happens next. Please make the chapters longer. Do a little editing also and it would be much better!

I cant wait for the next chapter

Great start. Liked the flow and the characters....can't wait to see what is next.

I need more!

Longer, longer, longer and post quickly.

Soooo can't wait for more on this.

Really like the story so far, but I can't wait to see if it's a HEA.

I'm voting 5 stars on this :D can't wait for more !

great start, looking forward to the next chapter

The editing mistakes don't detract from the story. Very good so far.

Nothing I haven't seen before but I still was engrossed in the characters. I really felt for Cody. I would suggest you either find someone to help you edit or beta, or try a few different techniques to catch the errors on your own like reading it backwards or aloud. I miss things all the time on my own even doing that, though, so I can't speak highly enough of having help. Keep writing, this story could be really good.