All Comments on 'Holiday Blackmail Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
almost caught

this one is awesome she is almost caught giving a another man a blow job, both risky and kinky

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

love it! DW

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
awesome!!

super hot!!! thank you!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
So Hot

Loved it! I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks so much!

HeyAllHeyAllover 12 years ago
Fucking incredible series so far

Each chapter is extremely arousing; and this one is no exception. I love how you keep pushing the boundries for her without going over the top and overdoing it. It's always just right amount of taboo and excitment.

Great job. Your writing style is perfect for these types of stories. My only complaint is that it's going to have to end eventually.

thanks.

MaturinMaturinover 12 years ago
conflict and tension

make a good story, and this one is great at generating them!

newfuntimesguynewfuntimesguyabout 11 years ago
very risky

although i feel slightly sympathetic for lucia when dave comes up with the riskiest situations possible, i gotta admit... ramming a hard cock load full of cum into her throat-mere seconds before she's needed at work or on stage- would be sweet

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