All Comments on 'Daddy and His Brothers Ch. 01'

I sense a new author fulfilling a long desire to explore her fantasies -- perhaps her personal experiences -- in prose. Very good first effort. Please keep up the work -- it's (ahem) cumming along.

It's crude and lacks finesse but it sure does make me wet and hot.

This is a good start to a promising series. May I suggest just another layer of detail as you write. Get out the main action and then wait. Then go back through and add more detail. That's how I do it. It takes a little longer, but the results are good. I really do like the way you write -- I just want more!

All i can say is...MORE!! please!!

Short but good can't wait to see next chapter

The concept is great but it felt a little rushed for me. I would have liked more details and not, for lack of another term, slam to the end. You could do a lot with this if you take the time and slow it down.

it was very kinky horny and made me cum. i loved it. plz write next ch quickly

This story made me so hot, my cock was so hard in my pink little panties......so hot!!!

I love stories of young girls and older men...I'm so wet wet wet. I'm still still rubbing my pussy. Where is part 2?

Normally I would skim or pass up on reading a story this short and lacking in detail. I would feel secretly superior and very condescending; hypocritical where I stand as I am yet to publish anything.

Instead I read every word, vigorously one-handed.

I don't usually like the extremely wordy and long-winded stories, because usually I'm on Literotica because I'm hard--and horny--right the fuck now. Reading a lot of back story, or hearing exactly how both (or all) partners felt, physically and emotionally--every damn moment--can get dull, drudging, or boring. Again, hypocritical of me seeing as I'm long-winded as all Hell's tortures, but it doesn't get me off.

Your story was just detailed enough to get me interested and stay interested. Thinking about it right now makes it difficult to not type one-handed. I love the intense debauchery of it, and how slam-bam it was. I made a sort of bemused/befuddled face when I read the initial "Yes, let's have sex it will be hot" exchange, but that wasn't the focus of the story. The focus was them fucking. Hard. You pulled that part off really well.

It's a quick and dirty story, and you wrote quick and dirty well. It could've been better, but it doesn't need to be. Slap some more detail in and you're gold.

Funny comic reference: http://questionablecontent.net/view.php?comic=1790

What a hot story, my cock was raging hard as the uncles started ravaging the daughter's pussy and then dad had her suck his cock. WOW! Mom should

join the fray and start sucking cock and eating out her daughter's cum dripping

cunt.

How about a follow up story with the uncle's son joining the group for some

hot cock sucking and butt fucking.

I want to be that gal so much my pussy is dripping

I WAS SITTING ON MY DADS BEST FRIENDS LAP KNOWN AS UNCLE IN A CAR AND I FELT HIS DICK GROWING ON MY PUSSY AND I LIKED IT SOOOO MUCH THAT I STARTED SHAKING MY ASS HARD ON HIS DICK AND HE WAS MOVING AS WELL...WE GOT HOME AND HE BABE SAT ME CUZ AND HE LIVED WITH US MOM AND DAD WENT OUT....HE SAID U LIKED HOW MY WEE WEE FELT AND I SAID YES UNCLE....SO UNCLE TOOK HIS DICK OUT AND I JUST GRABED IT AND KEPT FEELING IT....THE 1ST TIME I SAW A PICTURE OF A DICK AND MEN AND WOMEN FUCKN WAS IN MY DADS NASTY BOOKS AND MY LIL PUSSY GOT A TINGLE AND I WANTED TO FEEL A DICK IN MY PUSSY....UNCLE SAT ON THE BED AND SAID CUM GET ON UNCLES WEE WEE AND RUB UR POO POO ON IT HARD SO I DID JUS THAT......AFTER 20 MIN I JUST FLOPPED MY PUSSY DOWN ON UNCLES DICK BALL DEEP.....I CRIED AND UNC SAI IM TAKING IT OUT CUZ ITS HURTING U I SAID SAID YES ITS HUIRTING ME BUT PLEASE DONT TAKE IT OUT UNCLE CUZ IT FEELS SOOOOO GOOD BETTER THAN CANDY UNCLE.....UNCLE CAME ALL IN MY PUSSY AND THEN CLEAN ME UP....I STARTED CRYING AGAIN AND HE SAID WATS WRONG I SAID I WANT SUM MORE WEE WEE SO HE STARTED LICKING MY ASS AND PUSSY REAL HARD AND I SWEAR I LUVED IT CUZ I WAS IN CANDY HEAVEN......STILL FUCKN UNCLE NOW 8.....UNCLES BROTHER CAME OVER AND SAID UR RIGHT BROTHER SHE DO HAVA FAT ASS FOR HER AGE,,,,,,THEN UNCLES BROTHER PUT 3 FINGERS IN MY PUSSY AND THEN HIS BIG FAT DICK.....THEY TOOK TURNS FUCKN ME FOR 2 HOURS STR8 AND I DID'NT WANT THEM TO STOP.....YOU SEE I WAS ALWAYS BIG FOR MY AGE FAT ASS IN ALL.....I HAVE NO REGRETS FOR WAT I DID CUZ I WANTED IT JUST AZ MUCH AZ UNCLE AND HIS BROTHER.........I WAS 10 WEN I FLASHED MY PUSSY TO UNCLES 15yr OLD SON....HE SAID CUM WITH ME AND I DID JUS THAT CUZ I NU HE WAS GONNA RAPE ME THAT WAS MY PLAN ALL ALONE LOL.......HE SNATCH OFF MY BOTTOM AND TOOK OUT THE BIGGEST LONG HARD DICK EVER AND SHOVED IT IN MY WELL TRAINED PUSSY AND FUCKED ME FOR 2hrs NON STOP.....HIS DICK NEVER WENT DOWN WEN HE CAME.....I YELLED HARDER AND HE SAID I NU YOU LIKED DICK AND I SAID IVE BEEN FUCKN UNCLE AND HIS BROTHER WEN I WAS 4 YRS OLD......NOW 15 AND IM FUCKN UNCLE AND 8 OF HIS BROTHER IM 56 AND STILL FUCKN UNCLE AND HIS BROTHER AND SON.........I CANT HELP IT OF MY BLACK PUSSY CRAVES FOR DICK 24/7:):):)......HOPE U NJOYED MY LIL STORY........MY NAME IS HOTTCHOCLATE..

Hi im 16 name is Tina.My mom went to Las Vegas for 8 days with her sisters leaving me at home with my stepfather and my step uncle.But it started when i was 12 sleeping in my bed when i felt a hand touching my upper thigh and pussy,i knew it was my uncle because daddy was at work.I was on my belly and i slowly spread my legs so he can enter my pussy with his fingers.I moan and groan and he said you like that huh baby mmmm yes uncle i love it so i turned on my back and cocked my legs and he began to suck on my pussy until i starting shaking.But then i want to go futher and that's when i saw his huge dick hard as a rock.He spread my legs wide and slowly insert his dick into my pussy.I told him to put it all the way in and not to worry cuz i had sex b4 and i can take the pain.Yhat's when he fucked me like a mad man,he came in my pussy and kept on fucking me.Now you get on top of me and ride uncles dick like a good little whore and i did just that.I drained his ass fucking and sucking until we both were tired.Uncle went to work and i showered.As i got out the shower i went to the kitchen naked and got a soda and that;s when my stepdad came in the house and saw me naked and his dick ot hard and u can see the buldge.I did'nt know what to do but stare at his hard dick.He walked over to me and started touching my body and said im going to give you what you always wanted,yes daddy i always wanted to fuck you.I remember the day when you sat me on your lap and i felt your dick getting hard and i started moving and humping on your dick.Yes you did so why dont you bend over the couch and spread your legs and enjoy this dick.OMG OMG Daddy dick was about 11in and i moan groan and yelled in pain but he never stopped.OMG OMG DADDYIT HURTS SO BAD BUT I LOVE IT.Daddy fuck me fuck me harder daddy,omg daddy im cuming,im cuming daddy,faster daddy,ahhhhh fuc daddy git this pussy daddy..And after 45min of fucking we both came and when daddy came he took it out my pussy and grabbed my head and stuck it in my mouth and came in my mouth.I let it pour out my mouth onto my chin and floor..We go cleaned up and ate dinner.Uncle came home and we were in the living room i had my head on daddys lap and my legs on uncle..Then unc grabbed the remote and turned to porn and my feet felt uncle's dick getting hard and daddy was rubbing his hard dick..Unc was finger fucking me while i was jerking daddy.Unc grabbed me and sat me on his dick facing him as i bounce up and down on his dick i was sucking daddy's as he stood in ac of unc.I fucked daddy and unc for 3hrs and it was the best fuck ever.Im still fucking unc and daddy when mom ot around,,

This was so hot, I would love if my daddy and uncles would fuck me like this!!!

My favorite part of the story......They just sat there watching as daddy pulled my top up and took one of my boobs in his mouth while his hand wandered to my crotch. Soon I was wiggling out of my shorts so he could finger fuck me. The thought of them watching made me cum harder than I had yet.

Mmmmmm