All Comments on 'M?bius Strip'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
speechless~

is that why there are no comments?

dman good poem...bravo and whoohooo!

erotic lure and tantalize...please?

hehehe..well this has been a lesson

in erotic poetry! thanks~(~_*) Art~

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Fantastic!

This poem was fantastic. Wish I could write poetry like this. It is so erotic. I can just see her slowly stripping her clothes off for him and crawling into bed with him to hold him and rub her naked body against his and make love all night long.

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