All Comments on 'Those Eyes Ch. 07'

Pls hurry with the next chapter I am really using this story

if alex and santana are mates, what are the odds that her siblings and his might be as well, now that could make for a hell of a fine mess

I was afraid people would think that. I have no intention of matching up the siblings together except for maybe one for a later story. That'd just be ridiculous!

Why so short....... I was so getting into it!

If Santana's siblings resent their lives, what is stopping them from leaving?

Luv your story. This cliffhanger is about to kill me tho. But luv it luv it. So Anas bodygurad is she gonna find her mate while in school or maybe with Lorenzo ;-);-)

Ahywho great story.

I just spent the past few hours reading the entire story and.....WOW!!

I can't wait to see what Santana will do when she meets her siblings.

*****

I can't wait for the next chapter!! This is so suspenseful! You are an amazing writer =D

Great chapter.

and I'm caught up, What then?????

Curious to see who's destined for whom. By my calculations, though, we're missing one male and one female for a perfect set of mates. ^_^

Well....it seems like me and the angel are on the same page with placing

the puzzle pieces together. I'll continue riding with him......lol.

Audrienne wanted to bring Rain her cousin and Stephan her youngest brother that would bring us to 6 and Ash is gay so 4 ladies and 2 men perfect yes? plus we can add Rain's 7 siblings to the mix for more diversity.

Ahhhhh!!!!! August 2 is my birthday. That's aMazing. Just like this story is amazing!!

This has to be one of the weakest plot contrivances I've ever read.

Given that Alex is aware of his the status of his missing wallet, he should be immediately concerned with the bad guys having it now.

Returning home after having your father executed by a secret organization that has no problems murdering children to find said home ransacked and having strangers show up to said home relatively soon after your arrival and their ability bypass the security perimeter and Alex just so happens to lose his wallet that very day and isn't concerned? Really?

The story so far has been excellent. But this really weak plot crutch is really souring things.

I admit that using this plot turn was a little too easy but sometimes characters do dumb things just like real life humans do. If they were 100% safe all the time, nothing would ever happen.