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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good Story

Good story. Rushed a little at the end.

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 12 years ago
I really like your stories, but...

The sex scenes are usually too short and the stories in general are too short. You are doing so well, let's have longer stories with several sex scenes in each. Thanks for writing.

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