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Could It Be? Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by grunabona02/03/12

*****

Still charming.

Five.

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by Anonymous02/03/12

Thank you!

Im so glad you continued. These two have undeniable chemistry and im excited to see where this goes. Please dont let it be another two years before you update.

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by Scotsman6902/03/12

Good writing.

You've dealt with the main weaknesses in part one. Looking forward to more.

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by zia2702/03/12

thank you

Thank you all for your compliments - they are motivation.

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by mrskelley02/03/12

Loving it!

Wonder what he will do? Keep it going!

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by Anonymous02/04/12

nooooooo, keep going

charming story, KEEP GOING!!!! Oh, and please please PLEASE make the next part a bit longer

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by avrgblkgrl02/04/12

Oh I'm loving this...

I was happy to see the update. I hated to see it end. Next time longer! We are greedy for more:)

~AvrgBlkGrl

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by Madameblaque02/05/12

Great story!! Love the S.A. references-please continue.!!

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by Alpha_Marm02/05/12

Oh KKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

Now you've gone and done it!!!!! Let's roll up the sleeves and get down.
Here is a man with decisions to make. They are very attracted to each other and it is
palpable, but we know it will be for him to make a SIGNIFICANT move. His age makes him hungry for something fresh. He's seen much in his years. Not always a good thing for men.
She is younger, but clearly the more realistic one of the pair. Sistahs always have to be a step ahead in the game...all about survival.
Please don't make us wait tooooooooooo long.

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by Anonymous02/05/12

Love It!

But please don't let us wait soooooooooooooo long for your updates.

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by Anonymous03/11/12

wow!

Ur story is wonderful!! And it higlights exactly what goes on in sa... White men dnt really look at us black women but we have things to offer too!! Ur story is amazing! Can't wait to read ur next part!!

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