All Comments on 'Wolf's Pet Ch. 19'

by lilgirlsix

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katgoddess1katgoddess1about 12 years ago
Intense

I can't wait to see what kind of solution Xylon has found for the dire wolf genes.

huntersangelhuntersangelabout 12 years ago
well ok, now for the next order of business!

ha ha, mama said there'ld be days like these. now ya just know that cheryl is gonna go and do something to get herself in more trouble.....some people/were's just don't learn. now, onto gary and his minions!

CelticAngelsCelticAngelsabout 12 years ago

Can't wait to see what her punishmentis is, I hope that it is fitting of the crime.

I can't wait to see what happens to gary

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
FANTASTIC CHAPTER

Wow!! What a great story. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.Very climatic.Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.

aggie35aggie35about 12 years ago
Finally!!!

It's about time Rhys killed that little fucker!! I can't believe Karen changed and she had such great timing. Rhys would have gone crazy if something happened to Katy. I sure was wishing Karen could have killed Cheryl though... Guess we can't always have it all lol One asshole down and plenty more to go! Keep up the great job =)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
BY FAR, THE BEST CHAPTER YET!!

No questions were asked. No trying to talk him out of it. Just quick Were justice! And it put others on notice about their future should they step out of line! I cannot wait for the next one. GREAT JOB!!

MizTMizTabout 12 years ago
I Knew It!

I knew Cheryl would get what she deserved, I just didn't think it would happen so fast.That Karen was the one who realized something was up and follow her instincts, rather her wolf instinct was perfect. Her first turning is to protect both her friend a human and the pack. And what of the Council member who was evil? He lost his head. hehe-he And now Niklas is to be buried rather than cremated, I wonder if anyone else will step into his evil shoes knowing just what might happen to them.

Every chapter brings a great surprise. I can't wait to find out what the next one is.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Fitting end for Niklas.

Watch out for Cheryl! She is such a weasel pardon the pun that if she has an opportunity - she may supply some kind of assistance to Gary.

Kill her, now!!!

Ok, Xylon what is the solution. Quickly, tell us. Update needed - soon.

Thanks for this great story

vt

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great Story!!!!

I love this series. It has a great story line with plenty of twists and turns to add to the mystery and suspense. I can't wait for the next chapter! Great work!! I love the characters and can't pick a favorite while with the exception of Cheryl and Niklas. :-)

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxabout 12 years ago
YEEESSSS! DIVINE RETRIBUTION!

*Falls off chair

So coldhearted Rhys....to kill him like that and just walk out? I'm so proud of you *sniff* .....so proud.

Girl I don't know what plans you have for this story, but i'm with you all the way...HUZZAH!

Chuckles437Chuckles437about 12 years ago
woohoooo !!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!

ok waiting on edge of chair for next posting....loving this story....go girl!

farrahkellifarrahkelliabout 12 years ago
The BEST

Keep writing!! this was the best chapter so far. The other chapters were good but you needed help and you got it. I love the swift execution of Nikolas and the take down of Cheryl (that bitch) and now she doesent have an arm??! OOPS oh well should have left well enough alone stupid one arm having bitch. Okay can't wait for the next chapter.

one_literate_ladyone_literate_ladyabout 12 years ago
All I can say is

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lili82lili82about 12 years ago
YOU EFFING ROCK!!!!!!

Love, love, LOVE that Niklas got what he so richly deserved!!! And Cheryl should have known better but she was too busy being a gold diggin 'ho to think of the consequences; so as miss farrahkelli so nicely pointed out, she is now a one arm having bitch!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Can't wait until the next chapter. You rock!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmabout 12 years ago
Neat wrap up to evil

That ending to metzger was better than I thought possible and now we wait to see what they do for Cheryl.

Will be better once they close in on Gary and his crew. Can't wait!!

No prisoners and No cremation for any of them.

PyroLeo21PyroLeo21about 12 years ago

Absolutely fabulous end to Niklas! I hope you leave Cheryl alive to suffer w/ her one arm and guilt she'll never mate. Stupid bitch. Any way feel better soon we need more chapters

baikalisanbaikalisanabout 12 years ago
Good times

What a great chapter!

Thank you for continuing tbe story so quickly.

I look forward to updates every day checking

Like a junkie. Lol

bronzebeauty34bronzebeauty34about 12 years ago
Yesss!

I love how rhys delt with that one! Goooood chapter can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
YEAH BABY!!!!

justice is served i told you niklas was going to get his handed to him ih happy day. comgrats karen for kicking cheryl butt. can't wait for the next chapter i checking like fiened. keep it up. can't wait.

GO PACK BAXTER!!!!!! HURRA

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good Going!

Yeah!!!! One and a half (bitch who has one arm) down and so many to go.

Lets clean out the caves!

Good show, you go girl!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Loving the sequence :D xx

Well, i'm actually commenting on the sequence, i haven`t yet read this one but i soon will. I love how you write and how you put these sentences together, it makes a beautiful story. I just love your story, at one moment its tension and the next its all soft and gentle, your a true writer. I hope you know that! Well, i hope you do, wait i just repeated myself again :l Oh dam, that sucks oh well cbb taking it of :D

Sapphire x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Brilliant

Cant wait for each chapter as it appears really gripping story have been hooked since Chapter 1. Look forward to reading more.

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127about 12 years ago
Wonderful....An Excellent ending for the GREAT NIKLAS METZGER...LMAO

You know what??? Karma is a bitch and he got his. Always going behind someones back trying to cause harm so he got his just desserts. Cheryl without an arm she's going to feel like she can't live anylonger and be of use. So I guess she is getting hers now also. Ha Ha...punks

Sox_lover05Sox_lover05about 12 years ago
Great Story!!

Such an amazing story. I haven't commented until now, because I wanted to catch up. Now that I have I'm really depressed, because I have to wait :( lol

EdwarusEdwarusabout 12 years ago
Love it

Chapter was awesome cant wait for more

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 12 years ago
Second that

Brilliant and I hope Cheryl gets the same justice

booknerdbooknerdabout 12 years ago
I KNEW IT!!!

I knew Rhys was going to kill Metzger... the douche had it coming. Although, breaking his neck was a bit too genteel. I love the story, the characters are so well written. This series is a great read. Thank you for sharing this with us and I hope you continue to do so!

TahoeCatTahoeCatalmost 12 years ago
OMG

Whoa!!! I love it. You have me totally hooked.

DoctimeDoctimealmost 12 years ago
Love the story

What a hoot! Imagin, reading a Literotica story, not because of the sex, but because of the story. However, the sex is good also. You are a good author, with a vivid imagination. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I love him a bit myself...

... and I suspect that once they're dead, Gary, Paul and all of the current Dire wolves will be buried as well. Not sure about Cheryl though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Damn!

Well lilgirlsix you are awesome! I love that Rhys killed Niklas with his bare hands! At first I thought that Niklas was going to get Cheryl to try to kill Rhys but you surprised me. I wonder what will happen to Cheryl now. Maybe she'll tone down a bit but I doubt.

maxd01maxd01almost 11 years ago

Damn it!!! I wanted his throat torn out and lots of blood... Pouts

myassisdraginmyassisdraginover 9 years ago
Fantastic.....

I do not usually cmment on a series util the end but I do make the odd exception when it's as good as this one is.

Lilgirl, you keep apologizing for the chapters being so short, this is not a problem when the story is as intriguing as this one is. I for one am loving it. I have also had an idea about humans who are unknowingly Were and are found by thier mates and you have done a good job of turning it a story...

Thank you.

Myassisdragin.

ZsadistZsadistover 9 years ago
like a good bottle of red

This story has kept me very interested. In the beginning I was a little annoyed by how every bad guy/girl seemed to be a jilted lover. Now that more characters have been introduced and more character development has happened, this is becoming one of my favorite were series. It's action packed but flows so well. There have been some proofreading mistakes with some names but overall really really good job. Like a bottle of red wine, this story is getting better with time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow!

Only in fictitious stories can I allow my own animal instincts to glory in snuffing out the of a life of a villian. Normally I'm a pacifist that doesn't believe in corporal punishment but damn that was hot how Rhys lept to avenge his mate! I don't even have any sympathy for Cheryl losing her arm. Funny how primal my reaction is when reading and don't have to apply reality and all it's implications.

MickeyKayMickeyKayalmost 3 years ago

Yeeeeeeuuuuuuuaaahhhhhssss!!!! Yes! YEs!! YES!!! OMG a 100 times YEEEEEUUUUUAAAHHHHSSSS!!!!!!!! YOU ARE BRILLIANT!!! THANK YOU! SO VERY VERY MUCH!!! YES!!!!! I agree with the last anon almost 2 years ago Only in stories and movies are where my animalistic side asserts itself otherwise I'd have no outlet and that WOULDN'T be good! So Again THANK YOU!!!!

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