All Comments on 'The Strip Club'

by joey_who

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chastenchastenover 12 years ago
The thing is...

I'm always left wondering in these stories why the other person is labelled a "friend" or "girlfriend"? Getting someone to realize they are gay (or, apparently in this case, bi-) is one thing...something a friend might actually do. Making a plan to humiliate them while they are realizing this and then by emailing pictures to all and sundry...? With friends like those, who needs enemies? And, however happy he is with the sex, why is he okay with the betrayal?

hopkinscmhopkinscmover 12 years ago
Agreed

Though I fault the plot; I kind of believe that a cock is a cock no matter what it's made of and begging for a fake one is a huge clue into one's sexual orientation.

But the bigger issue really is the errors in your editing. Keep an eye out on your verb tenses. Get an editor or three to catch all the errors.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
hot!

next chapter please!

it would be great if the other girls were watching this time too :)

Jay3737Jay3737about 12 years ago

Thats sooo HOT!!!! Wish that was me! Great story! Hope you write more

Mr. BriggsMr. Briggsabout 12 years ago
Loved it

VERY HOT looking forward to more

kellijane001kellijane001over 11 years ago
Wow ...

I love it - turning a guy gay like that - hot !

betabradbetabradover 11 years ago
Mmmm yummmm

VERY HOT ! I loved this story. I wish I had a g/f like that who would make me suck a nice big hard juicy cock while she watched.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
So hot

So hot................almost came reading it.........i would love for that to happen to me.

velcro_zippervelcro_zipperover 6 years ago
Hot hot hot!!

I hope there's more of this story to come!!

cdCindy1cdCindy1over 5 years ago
loved this story

I would love it if my wife "turned me gay" like in this story. I love sucking cock and getting fucked. Having her watch would be fantastic.

Please continue this story. I can't wait to read the next few chapters.

stacejostacejoover 4 years ago
MMMMM...

Love it want too do it.......

Bbcluver59Bbcluver59almost 3 years ago

Mmmmmmm...very hot story. I had a dream a while ago, similar to this. Walked in by myself to strip club. Unbeknownst to me, it was a ladies night. And, well, much fun was had.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Whew, very hot story. I'll definitely follow this author.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Dang! What a delicious story. I'd love to see where this story goes? Your first cock won't be your last. That is so right.

1Martiniman1Martinimanabout 2 months ago

Very erotic moment in time. The photo/video part is always a fine line of eroticism for me, but with Karin, it being done more for her pleasure than to humiliate him…it was very hot. Nicely done!

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