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Camera Buff - Exposed Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/18/12

Great Story

You had me with Camera Buff, now I'm hooked and can't wait for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous01/18/12

same with annonymous

you've got me hooked on camera buff

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by Anonymous01/18/12

Amazing

I'm not sure what to say. I'm not sure why but I really liked this. Looking forward to more.

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by Anonymous01/18/12

Really enjoyed the story

I think making Rona Poor Trash added to the story espacially that Louis and her school had her built up as a Rich person. Making Porn allows you to continue the story and thanks for that.

Maybe you should include her sisters - They can have sex with Louis and/or his friend that helps them with the website.

Please continue and thanks

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by Anonymous01/18/12

Wow. . .

Wow. This was the best erotica I've read on her, honestly. It had everything for me; a great story, a lot of hot sex, great description, and the costume you picked for her was a personal favorite. I never comment, but I had to on this one.. thanks!

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by Anonymous01/18/12

nooooo. don't go there!

This was a sweet, almost believable romantic story until the very end. Your characters are smart and talented. Surely they can find another way to send her to voice school.

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by Anonymous01/18/12

Great story

Thanks. Enjoyed it a lot. Can't wait for the next part.

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by Laurie01/18/12

So awesome

I love the idea and the whole concept. Ignore the scoffers that say it's a bad idea. Mr. Anonymous talks down to the idea of Rona doing porn, but he comes to an erotic story site to get off. He doesn't want to use his name so no one will know what a contradiction he is. Only ever follow your own whims when you write, not someone else's.

Love, Laurie

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by Anonymous01/18/12

Awesome story

Awesome story, even better than the first one.
You have a real talent and described the different settings so well that I could see them in my mind.
I hope you continue with this story, it can only get better.

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by cbsummers01/18/12

Thanks for the responses!

I'm so gratified folks are enjoying Camera Buff: Exposed. I wrote this totally as a result of popular demand, and will definitely continue it (although I have pther stuff closer to completion). At firs, I couldn't think of a way to continue the story... but then I thought, what's the next step for a shameless sexual exhibitionist? Porn, of course! Rona and Louis have youthful, romantic notions about 'porn stardom' they'll definitely have plenty of time to consider the realities before their website goes online. It's a potentially risky and exploitative business. But before they cross that bridge they're gonna have a lot of sex, an their love is going to be severely tested!

As for realism... Whenever I see a drop dead gorgeous eighteen-year-old girl in hardcore porn I think, wow... what made her choose this? Maybe hardship or manipulation, but I gotta think a lot of them got into it for fun. The same reason some teens skateboard down staircases. Teens don't always consider, or even know the consequences, both physical and emotional, of their choices. But sometimes things turn out okay anyway. As for Rona and Louis?... Wait and see!

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by lawstudMN01/19/12

Related story lines

I was just reading your tutor story before reading this one, obviously as you know the characters are mentioned in both. Is there going to be an intertwining story line with them? Also will there be a 2nd chapter to the tutor story?

I love reading your stories, they are great. Keep up the awesome work.

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by Anonymous01/19/12

Really enjoyed it!

Very much looking forward to more in this series... Please!

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by Anonymous01/19/12

Nice!

Very nice.

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by NW_bi_boy01/20/12

It's a Hit!

Like others I very much enjoyed this and the 1st Chapter. As someone who started in photography at the age of 10, working with a professional photographer, I love the nerdy photographer angle. I certainly never had his experiences but I will say that now with more mature vision, I had some opportunities as a teen that I never had the confidence to act on. I find myself waiting to find out what will happen next. Don't let too many other projects get in the way!

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by Anonymous01/21/12

Love, love, love it!

A great story with nothing but positive energy!

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by Anonymous01/22/12

Very good

I can't wait for the next chapter. Well done.

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by Anonymous01/22/12

Excellent!

Next chapter coming any time soon? I loved it!

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by Anonymous01/23/12

Well Done!

I loved the story and writing was pretty good, too! (Not like some that I've seen on-line that are loaded with misspellings. I've seen some that change the name of their characters TWICE within a single paragraph!)
The story has a lot of potential, such as how deals watching and filming his girlfriend making porn, etc. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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by Anonymous01/24/12

Brilliant

I've read most of the top stories on this website and others and this is the best I have read, the erotic scenes were amazing and the emotions were vivid. The way Rona has been framed and then illuminated and the cliche of the untouchable popular girl were worked masterfully. I can't wait to find out how he goes about with getting the plan up and running and I can see there is amazing potential for some intensely interesting situations. I would consider writing this whole thing up as a book once your done.

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by brian21501/24/12

keep it up. this is a riveting story. can't wait for the next chapter.

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by sleeplessgurl02/04/12

Fantastic

This is one of the best stories I've read on here in a long time. And I read a lot.

The characters are so real and lovable. The reader can totally connect with them.

This story has so much potential. Don't listen to anonymous haters. I love what Laurie said on that point. So glad you are continuing this story. Keep going.

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

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by Anonymous02/05/12

amazing

The most beautiful, sexxxy hot, stories I've read in a long time. I think when it comes to making the porn part of it you should leave witUh just the two of them. I don't think bringing in anybody else to fuck her would be right. Your story is to trash like that.

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by akemi1802/05/12

Loved it

Great story, I really felt for the characters and enjoyed the pacing. I can't wait for the next part. Thanks for sharing your work!

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by Anonymous02/05/12

Wow!

I've never commented on a story before, but I love this series. Well written, hot as hell, everything you could want. Fan-fucking-tastic.

The ONLY thing I'm not sure about is jumping to 'love' so quick, but hey, why not?

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by Anonymous02/08/12

excellent, beautiful

I kept waiting for them to find existing 'home videos' on the film from his parents' camera

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by Anonymous02/10/12

Love your work!

I loved this story from the beginning and hope to read much more about these two. Your work is very good and I also checked out your other site and the photos. Again, wonderful work and beautiful photos.

Jill

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by Reefkeeper02/11/12

I couldn't stop!

I had a business appointment two hours after I discovered your stories. Blew that off and rescheduled my day so I could read your stories. First time I've ever done anything like that!

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by Anonymous02/11/12

sisters spring break

How about his parents going away and him staying home. She comes over to stay and do more photos. Sister come over looking for her and one thing leads to a another an they are doing movies etc. of them.

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by Anonymous02/13/12

Great couple!

Please keep the Camera Buff story going. I love the characters.

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by Anonymous02/21/12

Camera Buff

This story is absolutely phenomenal! The best I have read in my years here. Well done! Keep this line alive!

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by Anonymous03/12/12

Wonderful

I have never felt it necessary to leave a comment before, but this story is great!

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by Anonymous03/12/12

Barrett

Rona Barrett.......Ron Barrett. Somebody is a sniper rifle fan

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by Anonymous03/19/12

LOVE IT.

I Love to here more of this story.

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by Anonymous03/22/12

Perfect!

Awesome story, can't wait for more.

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by Anonymous03/26/12

Fuckin great story

I loved your story, kinda true to life, nerd gets the the hot chick.
good plot, keep em cumming

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by Anonymous03/26/12

awesome

Just found your stories and they are badass. They're the closest thing to 'believable' that I've ever read. Your descriptions are wonderful, and the depth you give your characters makes reading the story all the more enjoyable. Your premise is a really cool one - realistic (or at least as realistic as erotica can get) characters, in a realistic setting, focusing in on individual relationships while weaving in background on other characters... shit, you know what you're doing, I don't need to list it all off -- just keep doing it! But I must say... the whole "brother" thing was a major turn off for me personally. Perhaps, if you include any more "taboos," mention it at the beginning of the story? Although it was well written, I think the subject is sensitive enough to warrant a brief note. I'm a reader here, not a writer, so I don't know whether that is common practice. Just a thought. Whatever! I don't comment often because I ramble... obviously. So, TL;DR: your stories are awesome and you should keep writing them!

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by Anonymous03/27/12

Your best series

This is so much better than Field Trip Follies. Come back to it and add a few more chapters, please!

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by Anonymous03/29/12

Amazing

You are an amazing writer. I can't peel my eyes away from your stories no matter how hard I try. I would love to see another chapter on this. Keep em coming

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by Anonymous04/01/12

Excellent

Really enjoyed the story and the development of their relationship, and of course the hot antics, please do continue the the next chapter as I would love to see where this leads.

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by Anonymous04/01/12

Awesome

This was really good wow I love how u had Rona being the hot popular girl in school while he was a nerd :) I loved it! its now one of my favorites!!!!!!!

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by Johngfaulh04/07/12

Wonderful!

I couldn't stop reading! I could relate to the camera nerd well. His dream came true. I was actually sad when I reached the end. Have you ever considered going further with it? After Graduation? As the website starts. Making the money to make Rona's dream come true too, all the while her trusted lover is at her side, loving her more than ever she can know. If you continue it, please keep them together. Give them the happy ending neither one thought they could ever have. Bravo!

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by Anonymous04/12/12

amazing work

please continue this series, I love it

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by 13rabbit05/03/12

Great writer

I hope you stay with it, there are so meny authers that just stop.

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by renfrew_elit05/11/12

Looking forward to more in this series

Great work! I sincerely hope that you keep at it, this is a great story and well played out. Thanks!!

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by Anonymous05/15/12

Keep it up!

Seriously don't stop you have more talent than most authors i have seen

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by tongun606/02/12

excellent story!

of all the stories i read this one actually has a plot of some kind. wanting me to read more more. i hope the ending is not anti-climax. the dude needs more humiliation, cuckold

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by Drawu1206/24/12

Great job Guy!

Really great story. Gave me a boner the whole time. Your descriptions of Rona were hot and created an amazing illusion in my sick head. She reminded me of a girl I knew in college. Great job dude! I hope you keep on writing. Will be looking for more from you.

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by EricGrey07/01/12

Awesome

I had to comment on this series. One of the best I've read here. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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by Anonymous07/05/12

Great story!

Can't wait for updates too it! Don't leave us hanging!

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by JohnnyMax07/12/12

extremely well written

Keep up the great work. It's really good to read stories with no spelling/grammar errors. Also a well developed storyline with believable characters.
Continue please.

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