All Comments on 'My Adventure Ch. 03'

by RayStar

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice Work

Good story. I'm enjoying this. Please ignore any negative comments and keep writing.

ILienBagbyILienBagbyover 12 years ago
I want to Say

That this story is at a very interesting point. I hope you will continue!

Your writing is certainly vivid. Keep it going, please..

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Keep going

This story has so many places it can go. I am looking forward to many more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
We like this story

Keep up the great writing Ray, we like this story, in fact we love it. I love the idea of my own wife getting used this way, it would simply be incredibly hot. So I love reading about my own fantasy!

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