by RayStar
Good story. I'm enjoying this. Please ignore any negative comments and keep writing.
That this story is at a very interesting point. I hope you will continue!
Your writing is certainly vivid. Keep it going, please..
This story has so many places it can go. I am looking forward to many more chapters.
Keep up the great writing Ray, we like this story, in fact we love it. I love the idea of my own wife getting used this way, it would simply be incredibly hot. So I love reading about my own fantasy!