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All Comments on 'The Lonely Housewife'

by DeeLishus

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grayge37grayge37over 12 years ago
A bit rushed . . .

however, you could sense her anxiety through your writing. More detail would have been better which would have lent to a longer piece. You obviously have more chapters in mind - dealing with the other workers due. Try not to keep your readers waiting too long lest they lose interest.

DunaDunaover 12 years ago
???????

Was the handyman mature male and Mrs Adams was young trophy wife or Mrs Adams was mature cougar and the handyman (Henry) was young beginner??????

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
another dim witted slut eager to lose it all

and I hope she get exactly what she deserves.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
No Stars

How old are you - 12?

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