All Comments on 'My Coming Out Party'

by TheChameleon

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
MAYBE IF HE WAS MORE DOM

he would be less single. TK U MLJ LV NV

thilltellthilltellover 12 years ago
Discovery and growth

BDSM is not my normal cup of tea. Some I read through like a train wreck I can't look away from but I liked this one. There are so many things in society that weaken the male role. One thing your story brought to mind is how thin the line between respect and submission may be. I'll think more on that latter. You have created a character that you can continue with. I would like to see more of his progress that is not controlled by the little head.

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