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Here Cums The Bride

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/23/12

more?

a good start is there more to come?

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by Anonymous01/23/12

Stripping twice

You are aware you had your character strip twice right?

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by Anonymous01/24/12

No, the bride and her bridesmade were only forced to watch everyone else strip, she only stripped once

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by Anonymous01/25/12

An excellent story

Most of the time the surprise endings are given away way too early. This one kept it to the very end. Well developed and well written. I will look for your future stories.

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by Anonymous02/07/12

Does Karen or someone else discover James’ treachery and get revenge?

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When it comes to fantasy...

There is nothing sexier than a forced orgasm!

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by rightbank10/25/13

There is NOTHING sexy about forced orgasms!!

James should experience forced sodomy and repeated unwanted physical stimulation!!!!
I know some don't like to hear it but
RAPE IS RAPE
That the "boys" saw nothing wrong with their actions does not speak well of their Class. And I use class in many ways because none of them have any class at all.
Disgusting

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Tongue it.

Great fantasy story. Amongst all of the various assaults there was no mention of anyone licking any of the womens assholes. What a shame. At least one of them should have had her asshole licked, sucked and tongue fucked.

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