a good start is there more to come?
You are aware you had your character strip twice right?
No, the bride and her bridesmade were only forced to watch everyone else strip, she only stripped once
Most of the time the surprise endings are given away way too early. This one kept it to the very end. Well developed and well written. I will look for your future stories.
Does Karen or someone else discover James’ treachery and get revenge?
There is nothing sexier than a forced orgasm!
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