All Comments on 'The Abduction Of...'

I cannot wait to see more from you. I really do hope you continue with this story. I haven't gotten this wet from erotica in so long. Superb writing.

That was quite stimulating to read and possibly one of the (if not the) edgiest things I've read on Lit. Now for a re-read.

More please?

What a wonderful story - one of the best ever - thank you. I wish I could give you 50 8s for this, but 5 will have to do - please write more for us!

Thankyou to everyone who has posted comments of encouragement, and/or favorited this story or myself.

Life's been a bit hectic lately, so I have not been able to write any more of this story. However, holidays are coming up, so hopefully I'll be able to please you all with some more words in the near future.

Prof. ;)

Oh this left me soooo wet. Please more! I'm begging. I'll be your good girl - anything - just keep writing!

Please show a little bit of mercy and give us more?

You should write more.

Definitely.

Pretty please?

The premise and story are a huge turn on but it is in desperate need of an editor. I was unable to enjoy the story at all and almost quit reading because of it. Please pick 1st or third person and stick to it, if it is in 1st person he can not know what she feels only guess. It may be easier 4 u to write from her point of view, but pls keep writing a good editor would make this a real keeper!

to much you this and you that, creativity with words, descriptions, ugh, wouldn't pay to read this

I wish this was being done to me; I'm talking everything including the butt plug enema and being ball gagged AND especially the plastic bag over my head.