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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
See spot run!

How old are you, 10, 12?

mschack63mschack63about 12 years ago
Hey anonymous...

your a fucktard. This was a cute little story. I just love women authors.

beejay45beejay45about 12 years ago
Don't listen to that anon

It was a good little story. I hope you continue to write. :) ty

imurddyimurddyabout 12 years ago
wow

What a hot story. A little bit like a bullet train, the ride was over before I was ready to get off. But I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
poor little idiot

surely the author is not a woman.if u seen u will notice that it is only about satisfaction of male desires.even in erotic stories we need enough justification.why on earth marcy feels so horny by seeing her dad's cock?even a slut would not rush to sex like this .marcella plz think and read more before u bother urself to publish it on web

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A loving daughter

Lucky daddy, hope he flips her over and takes her up the ass whilst spanking her then licks out his creampie and shares it with her, perhaps then she will return the favour and rim her daddy and then have a nice spitty kissing session until mom comes home. Perhaps she will join them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
ENJOYING

My enjoyment of the story was spoiled.

Because the author could not be bothered, by checking for spelling mistake, which in turn lead to poor grammar

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