All Comments on 'Mall Display'

I really loved how this story was very simply constructed, straightforward, but very efficient as erotica while intimate and sweet as a story of partners playing. Each little detail was well-chosen.

At first I was almost like: why the hell isn't she telling him not to go cutting her dress without consulting her first! But I quickly went with it, and I'm glad I did. The submission is very sweet, and the sexy payoffs were delightful!