by fiestyyredhead
It seems unlikely to me that a woman would say (or write), "My firm 34B tits were being cupped in his hands." Really? "My firm 34B tits?"
Qwitcherbitchin! 34B is far more likely than 36D. I couldn't figure out whether she was an anal slut or a pain slut. Hot story, though, wither way.
Why wouldn't I write details about both myself and my boyfriend? I've been told I have incredibly perky and firm tits, so why not write about them? And I'm not so much into pain but I've started to really like anal for some strange reason. And I wouldn't call myself a slut for doing what I do with my boyfriend of three years :P
Also, if you're going to talk shit, you should quit being a coward and stop doing it as an Anon.
This was spectacular! Dont worry too much about criticism. Your stories are hot & I like where they are going. Kepp on keeping on! =)
Sadomasochist encounters have a place, but not under "Third time around" 'Anal-sex' descriptions! Get yourselves an inflatable dildo, then wear that stark naked 24/7, until your male lover removes it?
I am glad you have come over to the "Dark Side". I love the way you relayed a true event. Can we have more?.
For the critic(s) in the bunch - I'm pretty sure the title is "My True Story," not "A Story Where My Breasts Are The Size My Boyfriend Wants Them," or "A Story That Has Been Changed to Make it Hotter." (Fiesty, I am not implying your bf doesn't like your breasts, just illustrating a point!)
Sure, she could have changed some of the story, maybe spiced it up for you, but that's not what MOST regular readers on here would be expecting based on the title.
Keep up the good work. Try writing a fantasy and see how it differs for you.
But why the pain? My experience is that even with 7 inches, once it is in you there is no pain or even discomfort. And there is nothing more erotic than feeling your guy shoot his load up your ass. Some readers might be turned on by pain, but I just enjoy being fucked in the asshole.
That was a hot story. And as for the anonymous critic, I think he's just mad cause thats how big his tits are. He's thinkin, "How can I get aroused thinking about a female with my sized tits."