All Comments on 'Schwanky'

by brentcanuck

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estragonestragonover 12 years ago
Turnabout is Fair Play?

Schwanky? Skanky! But fun to read, despite needing copy editing.

NoiraNoiraover 12 years ago
Oh MY

I laughed.

I'm pretty sure that by the category, that was the goal. Five stars for that.

CocokisesCocokisesover 12 years ago
Oh my!

Lol to funny. Great story I can't wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Amazing

This was hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing.

KGB1979KGB1979about 12 years ago
Very funny!

You really had my rolling a couple of times. I would recommend that you get someone to read your stuff that knows what they are looking for. There are some spelling and grammar errors that really detach from an otherwise well told story.

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