All Comments on 'A Fucked Up Modern Family'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
AWESOME.

One of the best stories I've read. Can't wait to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Crap

No more of this garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Seriously!

Come on, Modern Family, really? How do you turn that into this? I stopped reading it, it was bad. Really bad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Tag

Shouldn't this be under Celebrities?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

keep the story going

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

for the next story, could you have claire gets assfucked by Jay and swallow his cum (after blowing spit bubbles and garggling it)? also could claire give Jay a rimjob?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Ehh

It was written fine but the premise is uncomfortable. Gloria is supposed to love Jay. Could have still done everything else with that adding on and it would be way better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

please write sequel

wolfgirlbiteswolfgirlbitesover 10 years ago

your story's keep getting hotter

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Upset

Really hot story but gloria would never do that. She is a loving caring women not a cheating whore

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Loved it!

Loved the modern family story ...We need more ...Maybe Claire ,Haley and some black studs .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

would like to see haley,clare and Gloria together.

maybe haley in bondage with those 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More

More Haley and. Jay together pease! Maybe even an unwilling Haley

Blk_CuckoldBlk_Cuckoldover 8 years ago

Make it really interesting and kinkier by making the story A Fucked Up Bisexual Modern Family. After all Mitchell and Cameron are a gay couple on the show. I wish I had the writing talents, I would hook it up. Good job anyway, I enjoyed it.

xfeme4femexxfeme4femexalmost 7 years ago
A fan

I am actually a fan of the TV show, so yeah this really got my juices flowing. Especially imagining Sofia being violently ass fucked by the strap on. Picturing myself being the one wearing it almost made me cum just as violently. Thanks..

Marklynda2Marklynda2almost 2 years ago

Yep that's pretty messed up alright.

Never really got into the TV show but would love to get into Sofia, yum. Very stroke worthy story. Has great promise as a serial. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I don't know how messed up the story is, but your writing is low-quality. How many weeks old are you?!

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