All Comments on 'Joe'

No my kind of story!

Predictable & Lame. Not one of your best. At least he didn't remarry the slut Ex wives can make great fuck buddy's, but no birth control? How stupid is that?

I voted three stars, which is probably one more than you deserve. Ah well, can't hit a home run every time.

DG's stories always read well - his narrative style makes interesting and easy reading, and this story is like that. I liked the twists and turns. The plot is credible - nothing over-the-top, no violent revenge - just patience and good sex along the way. Living well is indeed the best revenge.

I liked it, maybe it was a bit predictable, but good anyway.

I liked the story, but found it a bit confusing around the end of page four where it seemed to jump around a bit in the time sequence.

A really nice read; predictable, but fun. I'm not a big fan of the truck driver stories though...might have been interesting if he were a traveling Viagra salesman. Wait, maybe that's been done.

DG dont write what others want,write what you want to write. This is not a DG story.

Again your effortless free flowing story telling was top notch. The characters were well done. I enjoyed that he wasn't maudlin over her, and lived his life well. Her regret, and apology was good. It was an appropriate reconciliaton and him refusing to set foot back into the house, nice. Great twist with Carol's questioning her unborn childrens father. Timing is everything. Heh heh heh. Revenge is a life lived well, especially when you did her sister, had many partners, when the ex only had one to show for. But who's counting?

My thanks to you and Estragon! Good team.

Thank you!

M1

I was surprised to find a DG Hear protagonist doing married women but possibly

I have forgotten other examples. Joe was clearly anything but a wimp, though there are those around who will say that if Marge is still alive, he is a wimp!

You write some great stories and this was one of them. Look forward to more

... to get yourself a good Proof-Reader and a decent Editor.

I've read a few of your stories and they are all let down by sloppy spelling, grammar and/or punctuation.

you've managed to exceed your previous level if idiocy which is quite an accomplishment for you.

while the wifey keeps on shucking. TK U MLJ LV NV

God plot, fine storytelling, nice character development-well done story all the way around.

One of those "Karma Payback" tales

thxs for posting!

Thanks for sharing.

love your stories. this was not your best but dam good compaired to other writers.

your critics are jerks who get there jollies off puting your work down..

Yes, I loved it.

Thanks.

The only thing I was thinking after I finished was why you didn't choose to put this in loving wives. Then I thought about all the comments and commentor's in that section and figured you decided to save yourself the grief. Great god as always thanks so much for sharing your talent.

...and dumps him to trade up. He is devastated, swears he'll never forgive her and vows never to set foot in the house again. By the end of the story, she's back in his bed and back in his life, but he still refuses to set foot in the house. He forgives her, but he's still pissed at the house!?!?

I think the story was good with a decent plot, but I don't think it was executed well. The structure was short and redundant. It lacked rhythm and personally, I'd go for more description. It's hard to imagine scenes and characters without details.

Loved how the author wove the various stories into one grand story....I, the reader, was thoroughly surprised and entertained by what started out as an unconnected story and "poof" was brought back to the main characters...very clever and delectable. Thank you DG Hear.

A good read. The various stories linked well and made for a bigger story than any one of them would have been, IMHO.

I will likely read some of your other stories. Thanks.

When I first started reading this story I didn't think I was going to be a fan, but I kept reading and I am glad I did. It's a good read. There are some misused words and some technical problems here and there but overall it works.

This is a believable reconcilation with excellent romantic revenge. However I think Joe should hope Carol's children is not his. To pay children support money after law suit to Mark.......

but this one didn't do it for me.

There is no excuse for cheating and all the characters are cheaters.

There is no one to like in this story.

Once I hit the third cheater I called it quits.

To all the nay-sayers who do not appear to have any trace of a submission all I can say is FICTION!

Do better if you are capable.

Joe doesn't strike me as the kind of guy who would father twins and then just walk away from them.

She at least knew what she was doing would not be acceptable to her guy (those she had met so far). So she stayed away from a committed relationship herself.

For the rest of the cheaters and enablers - sheesh -

But it was an interesting ending - and could happen I guess -

It was well conceived and written either way -

Is pretty much disgusting. The husband, the wife, the other couple... good god, they all ought to be fucking sterilized. So it was fine for him to fuck on the road while married to his wife, but not for her to fuck around on him? Look, I hate people who cheat, no matter the gender, no matter if they all fall back on 'it was just sex' because that shit never is just sex. Not when you're supposedly committed to another person.

Just fucking euthanize everyone but the children from this story, I don't see any hope whatsoever for them.

Hey DGH, I enjoyed reading all of your stories very much. I have given You more 5's than anyone else. It would be nice to read more.Thank You. Anon49

After getting cheated on, he goes out of his way to do the same to other marriages? doesnt show much character. Overall, really good story though.

I suppose when your wife shits on you you lose respect for women and do the same to them...after all...no one forced them to fuck him...so they are all losers too....

I couldn't stop reading, thank's!

Very good story-Just disappointed that Joe lied to Carol about having a vasectomy when she told him she was in her fertile period--After all Carol had nothing to do with Joe's situation and I think it was a mean thing to do to Carol on getting her pregnant to get back at Mark

Getting Carol pregnant was a dirty deal which may come to bite Joe in the butt especially if one or both look like him. On the other hand, she stopped taking her birth control pills. I'm not sure if Mark knew of her intention to get pregnant. Carol wouldn't be the first woman to trap a man through pregnancy.

On the whole, it was a fun story where Joe was able to live life after being betrayed by his wife. Yes, there was reconciliation, but it was done through time and building back their relationship. The best part was he didn't marry Carol again. I know a couple of guys who did this only for the wives to cheat again and ended up divorce.

Joe was a despicable individual. Cheated on marge while on the road with no remorse, then later made Carol pregnant our of revenge.

Should have had his balls removed. Marge cheated but was long after Joe was cheating. She was faithful to Mark as well. Would like to know how long she was married to Mark.

He didn’t cheat dumbass he said he was faithful on the road till the bitch cheated on him fucken liberals are dumb as shit make it out to b the guys fault he won’t lick ur boyfriends cum from your pussy not all men are Cucks waiting for our 5sec should have not gotten back with her should have fucked the little blond in front of her then wiped his dick off on her blouse 🖕

90% of all your stories are great I am almost half way thru you catoloque Kepp up the great work (jaybee186)

I think that this is the most heavily sexual story I read from you. There are however a number of inconsistencies with names and the timeline. Hence the 4*

BJ

A perfect lesson in how to create a story wholly populated by obnoxious characters with absolutely no redeeming features.

Which I suppose is another way of saying more of the same for this author.

What a scum sucking, bottom feeder he is, his wife cheated on him so he knows the pain that it causes, then he targets married women. I can only hope that one day he gets caught and gets a good kicking.