All Comments on 'Willing Student, Willing Teachers'

Really enjoyable read - please keep it going

definitely keep it going

It could use the help of an editor. The over and frequent use of "—" and "..." detract and harm stories super fast as nearly all can be removed and replaced by a coma or just end the sentence completely. This goes back to the very elementary basics of good English.

I can't wait to hear what happens next!

Great first story......should not be your last

eric that was a tour de force. just the right balance of development and sex. i was left wishing i was ther. so aroused. well done xx gina

This should not be your last story - you have what it takes to be a very good author!

Keep up the great work. I look forward to raeding some more chapters!

This absolutely should be followed by a sequel. You have done a magnificent job in presenting this. Keep on writing. Your skill is quite apparent as well as your ability to portray the various players and their respect for each other in this erotic situation. .

This is by far an awesome story, Eric. Very well written with a nice plot and buildup to the actual sex scene. You did an awesome job for your first try, and I hope this will not be your last. You seem to have the talent for many more to come! Thanks.

I told you it was good! Great Job!!!

It's so hard to develop one character so to get four fleshed out so well is hard. Morgan steals the show but I can't wait to see her get usurped! Please say she does. I love the way you built up the atmosphere and can only imagine where this will go!

Brilliant first chapter.