All Comments on 'Naughty Genie Ch. 01'

I like the general direction this is going, though would like a little more description during the sex scenes. Thumbs up over all and hope to see some more of this series soon

and clever. Towards the end it went down hill a bit. 16 inches?????? My friend be reasonable.

Most writers stop at 1 or 2 aditonal partners.

Slight mathematical error 33 new containers. Means 34 Genies or one was empty. (possible story plot here),

What about the other Genies did they know of any other vessels. Or was there a reason to stop with what the first one knew.

i havent laughed that hard in a while from a story ive read here. 16 inches! and 34 women?!

when is the next part coming out

I liked it but it needs work.

Well worth the time to read for such a good chuckle - thanks!

so you go for 16 inches long but only 1-1/2 thick? and you really should post that in the satire section