All Comments on 'Old School Ties'

great story, i totally woohooed the last bit. can't wait to read more from you.

I loved this story, please continue. It was an teacher who help me to moved to higher things in life.

Thank you for your story. I just found you because one of the best authors on this site has you on his favourites list. I look forward to reading more of your work and hope that some of it will be longer,

I think you could have run thsi story to 2 pages, but it does stand on it's own. Well done.

Having not seen each other in a year,several paragraphs describing the relationship building to a marriage proposal seemed to be needed. ~ A very good story in need of a more thorough closing.

I enjoyed this little tale a lot. You’ve taken the time to clean up those annoying little errors that detract so much. I appreciate good writing, and I admire your ability. Your story flows smoothly to its abrupt ending. I have to hold it to 4* however, because I’d really like to have some erotic content in a story on this site.

Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing.

One minor niggle, his school would have been on his resume so she would have known so the post interview conversation doesn't ring true.