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magmamanmagmamanabout 12 years ago
Nice

And a very interesting writing style.

Thanks,

MGM

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Love it

I love the all-dialogue style. Great ending, very witty. Can't wait to read more from you.

showheroff22showheroff22almost 6 years ago

Fucking love it.... My cock would have burst through my pants.

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