All Comments on 'The Pin Ch. 03'

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nadinephillipsnadinephillipsalmost 10 years ago
Very good story, sounds like an improvment to the way we live today....he he

Excellent story, interesting plot and approach, the only thing missing is when Heather drops to her knees and sucks and cleans Hugo's dripping cock, cleaning her and his juices from him, smiles and swallows as Hugo grins widely.

Good job, would love to see the next chapters as she grows in use and confidence and finds she wants it more and more and no longer removes her pins once her minimum obligations are achieved.

Thanks, more please...................Nadine

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Except for "ramming it in", it looks like Señor Hugo was a good choice. I second the proposal by nadinephillips.

Enjoying he series so far!

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