All Comments on 'Unexpected Night'

i loved the way you poured your heart into this. i love the way you described your body. trust me, there is nothing wrong with a thick woman. thick women are meant to feel bad about their bodies only because of the way models are portrayed. as some people put it, real women have curves. more men are attracted to thick women but because of the sterotype are scared to admit it.

i knew from the begining that the intruder would be your bf. how he knew your body and what you truly liked. in your state of mind you would not have thought of your bf. men and women should let their defenses down at times to find out what they truly like.

you should write more on the things that keep your defenses up and how they can be broken. you should have explained exactly what you wanted the intruder to do to you in more detail.

so much detail, intrigue, ........... its a perfect story

Hey you probably wouldn't be able to guess who this is so i will just tell you lol... its E and i cant believe you've been hiding your little writing talents from me, i never get to read the juicy stuff first hand. So anyways pretty good but not your best stuff dont know just dont feel you put your heart into it (and i think we both know who william is really suposed to be), though sadly i dont look like him much *pouts* Love ya Honey Child

now, now.... William was based on no one, at lest no one I know. But you will be surprised to know that the story I am working on, your looks were definitely an inspiration, though I kinda made that character a little whiny ... wait that is like you...lol j/k you know I love ya my purple monkey.

I think women with thick or full figures are very sexy. I loved the way you blended the romance bit at the end. You work baby.

I liked it, I did, I did indeedly.

=D

go back to english night school

I wish there were more stories like this one. Often the stories are crude and a bit too... graphic. I thought this was just right, as you balanced everything well with sensuality and romance.

Hopefully I'll be seeing more from you :) Keep it up!

crass writing, terrible grammar, rotten use of format and the whole premise just reeked, over used and very badly done. If he'd been my boyfriend, his nuts would be hanging on a wall.

Well i must say this was an well written work you have done here! i loved it utterly! and i loved the twist never saw it lmao....

keep em coming! i have to go read this again i just love it!

DarkWolfie Say's congratulations!

would u write some more stories, my boyfriend said he might get some guys together with me and have some fun all because of this story. thanks

Really good content and storyline, even if the twist was a little obvious, but seriously! I actually got angry at the mistakes you were making! I mean, seriously you have to proof read, that sort of stuff might not get picked up on spell check - depending on the sort of words you have in your dictionary, honestly, cocking?? Good grief..

i loved it xD

very well written, i loved the humor and originality in this story :3

thanks for sharing and keep up the good work

That was ... different ... in a really really good way. Hope you have lots more from where that came from .

I had a feeling it would be her boyfriend, but loved it all the same :)

and I would absolutely love this to happen to me one day.