All Comments on 'Secret Valentine'

Magnificent!

like to hear how it ended, did he have the same hidden feelings for her?

By far the best story I have read in a long time. A beautiful woman, a sexy tease and a wonderful delivery of her treasured prize. I hope there is more to follow.

The second part he looks at security cam in elevator. He makes his own plans now.

whew, to hot to type...he has cameras, he knows.!!!

please continue, only greatness can describe the ending.

Fantastic, well written, more coming I hope?

awesome next installment please!!!!

That was by far one of the best stories I have read in a long time. As others have stated.....a part 2 is a must!!!!!! This story makes me want to go out and secretly seduce some hot guy and I'm married!

GREAT story and I look forward to more! ; )

Really great erotic story.

Very hot indeed!! Like the others, you make me wanna go have a "secret" interlude! ;)

Sincerely,

TemptressZee~

This story soaked my panties! I hope to use this story as inspiration in my own workplace and know I'll use it later when I'm touching myself. Thanks.

this was wonderful story i ever read all the best for you next stories

Thanks for a great story. tom anon

I just posted the second installment to this story entitled IM Black Silk Scarf. It chronicals Kim as she follows orders from a secret office admirer. She's convinced it's her boss, but she's not sure. Whoever it is pushes her to new sexual limits.

I'm dripping wet

he is mid 40's YOU WILL cheat because he will be DONE when you are ready to rock

The plot was okay, but just barely. The poetry was horrible. Your grammar was pretty good, and your punctuation needs some work. The idea of your plot is promising, but the poetry killed it for me. If you are contemplating a rewrite you might want to consider using prose instead of poetry. Writing the instructions in sexy prose would play to your strengths. You were brave to try the format you used, but in my opinion it just didn't work.