All Comments on 'BBW Encounters Ch. 07'

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Anonymousabout 12 years ago

This story didn't turn me on. Erotica should be a mind fuck. Creating pictures in your mind.

CanadianM about 12 years agoAuthor

Too Bad

Too bad you didn't like the story... but more constructive criticism would be helpful.. always looking to improve!

Anonymousover 11 years ago

thank you

i love your stories so very much.

xoxoxo

Liz

txcracker over 10 years ago

This was a short descriptive story . Very well written . It didn't lead to where I thought it was , but alas that is where the writer makes it his story . Am reading the series and enjoying it very much .

Thanks

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I enjoy writing stories for others in the hopes that it will turn them on and give them some pleasure, please feel free to comment and give constructive criticism. I also love to take photographs, and would like to expand my boundaries in that pursuit. I am a mature male and e...

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