by theo_minor
Loved the twist at the end, look forward to Part 2 :)
Okay, were left with a cliff-hanger here. Tracy has a mild heart attack at the news that Jeff wasn't shooting blanks, so maybe she is with child, and was just getting ready to tell Ron of the happy event. But oops, now she doesn't know if it might have freckles and red hair? Please finish us off!
A little bit of a vague ending. Or maybe I’m just dense. Either way, I didn’t think the ending was very satisfying.
Thank you for making the story so erotic and wholesome and pro-family all at the same time. Love the twist!
Watch where you're pointing that thing...
Jeff is loaded with sperm and can impregnate any woman within range. Good story with a twist. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Great story, could picture the action and imagine the complex feelings.
Would love to read more about the two couples.
Wonderful story. A creative and unexpected ending: happier than I imagined. Jeff unintentionally won the lottery. Congratulations.