All Comments on 'Heart-shaped Box'

No other comments. Mmm. Well this one to me is the best. Great story. Great sex. Sweet just for valentines day. This is what it's all about. Thank you.

Great story. Would love to see another chapter, maybe with them getting it on in the store. : )

Yep; excellent build-up showing potential for a very long-term (maybe even permanent) relationship ... DKP

she was H-O-T & had 2 kids (Brett & Katie) moved in next door and was living with a guy

One day after he'd left for work, the kids knocked on my door saying that Mom wanted to talk to me, I followed them next door and found Mom getting into a shower (O M F G; I swear time stopped completely still for me). I know that she would have completely "freaked out" if anyone had made a noise to draw her attention; so I backed out. Obviously it was a set-up by the 2 kids, but I was in shock!!! Realizing that she didn't know about it; I told the kids to let her know I was there and waited in the living room.

A few months later they broke up because he was abusive. Unfortunately; she and the kids moved into a secure apt complex. Dumb Shit me - I never said anything to her about it. 18 years later - I royally kick myself in the ass; I really liked all 3 of em.

I can still see that image; it's as clear as though it happened 5 minutes ago Grrrrrrrrr ... DKP

What a hot story. Valentine's day at it's best. When she was on her knees showing her heart shaped ass he should have spread her cheeks wide and licked and sucked her tight little tangy asshole, tongue fucking her until she came again.

a romantic love story for Valentine's Day

I worked with a guy named Chris who was younger than me and he is my fantasy. I would love for it to play out just like this. Thanks for a different version to get off to.

Great romantic story. Wonderful read.