All Comments on 'Italian Teases/Pleases Black Ch. 02'

racist crap

The beginning read offers great promise. Unfortunately, the author seemingly likes to 'tease'......NOT COOL!!! Oh, by the way, the editing is very good--unlike many other literotica stories.

When I saw Chapter 2 listed as a "new" story, I was overjoyed having just read Chapter 1,, few days ago.( and wanting more).

I think that Carmina would be pleasing to anybody. Not only is she competent but carries a strong degree of sophistication in her character. She is a 'keeper', or close to it. I can't imagine anyone replacing her. After all, she is a major pesonality/character in your storyline..Plus, your discription presents her as more than simply attractive. She's sexy,intelligent, dresses well, and knows how to carry herself around a man. Probably a damn good cook , as well

But. I'll be patient. Even though the story is opening slowly, it promises a degree of excitement, sex, other interesting characters--including your fiance (lovely and sexy-.Well worth the wait---so far,so good! I'm looking forward to Chpts3,4,5,6,..why not a novel.

I can see this happening. Not an overt predatory stalking but certainly leaving a scent that's hard not to follow. Exacting descriptions with realistic motivations and reactions. You've got me hooked. Ignore anonymous' racist rant. It has nothing to do with THIS story.

Amazing can't wait for more.

I appreciate your comments! It is not my intention to tease. Instead, I am trying to let the story unfold to reflect some of the twists and turns that lie ahead. This is my first story and your comments will help 'fine tune' others I will write.

Thanks again!