All Comments on 'Our First Date'

by JonB1969

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

hope you will wright again soon love your story hope their is more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
The next day?

From the very first sentence I felt like I had started my reading in the MIDDLE of the story. What happened the day before? There was no introduction. Who are these people? I kept stopping to check the page number trying to make sure I hadn't skipped a page. Then I stopped to see if maybe this was a sequel. Very disconcerting.

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literate9 months ago

Reminds me of the lyrics “tell me again can we be lovers and friends”

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