All Comments on 'In Paradise Ch. 05'

Please update soon I can't get enough of this story.

This story while interesting is so confusing.....

please continue, im on this roller coaster now and I cant get off until I know how it ends

I felt confused with chapter 2. I like this story, I don't think it should be listed under 'Fantasy', more like non-human or reluctance/non consent or even bdsm (for chapt. 4). If her attacker is more than just some stalker, go for non-human. She can now read minds, go for sci-fi (paranormal). I wish there was an app that would signal when a story was updated on this website. Wishful thinking.