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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
sequel?

great story, but a sequel would be nice. does she ever find out who this guy is and how she fucked him. what happens to his friends. does the coach and his football factory come back for vengeance too?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Payback? For what?

He is a loser, from a long line of losers. Has the poorest grades on the team. Could not get in college on either his football skills or his academic success. She was not willing to take an illegal bribe to cheat on behalf of a crooked coach and had to leave the area for her safety. So, he thinks with his feeble brain and strong code of ethics it is justifiable "payback" for him to rape and humiliate Her? WRONG!

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
I am hoping she gets her payback on him

As soon as he leaves, she calls the police and reports the rape. Goes to the hospital and has a rape kit done with lots of pictures. When he returns to her house the next day the police are there waiting for him. And in prison he learns how it is to be on the receiving end.

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