All Comments on 'Hypnotic Ch. 06'

I cried!

That was such a tease. Great chapter but so short. Just giving us a taste. Tsk Tsk Cia, always so mean to us like that lol. I'm excited to see what happens when he tells Dav about his brother. Dav can't get to upset because if he wants Ellis to live then hes gonna have to keep him with him.

Great job though

xoxo

C.

And that's a compliment because it's my favorite movie ever...

*fans self* I can't breathe! lol I love the way you do that. Another amazing chapter, thank you.

i took a huge gulp when Ellis was talking to Matt about his brother. maybe he is only a good friend, but I felt as if giving him Isiah's location was a bad thing.

All that he has to go through, I feel so bad for him, he is so nice and sensative. He is my favorite so far, and I thought Davis was!

You certainly know how to weave a great story line, lol.

My god that was intense and beautiful... but why does it have to end please hurry with the next chapter

finger licking gooooooooood....

Just when I think I know where this is going, you shift into Ellis' blindness. Ther's nothing like a medical emergency to draw him and Dav back together. Beautiful and powerful, love the characters, give us more soon.

This is fantastic...I love the way you are weaving the web of this story!!! I can't wait for each chapter to come out!!! Absolutely wonderful!!!

This is so good. I love the bond and the love their despite the undercurrent of mistrust between them. I'm desperate to see about what happens to Isiah and his mate and how they react to Matthew. Or how everyone will react when they realize Ellis' kept secret. Ahhh! So much anticipation! Love it! Can't wait for more of these characters!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

ultimate surrender - achingly beautiful

I posted a new chapter today for Hypnotic, so it will post soon. Thanks to everyone who has been reading and commenting!

This was like the best chapter so far. Loving it!!!

Best chapter so far.

this story is so fucking awesome,you have no idea,ive been following it from chapter one,but i have a teeny,tiny,problem,i think there are too many tears.that ellis and dav are gay doesn't mean they have to cry all the time,but apart from that,perfect