by Xarth
Would love to read a brother/sister or father/daughter version sometime.
i don't normally read F on F stories. but this was enjoyable. and left me horny
Great story, although rather long getting to the point that we knew it would.
Her fear of the love for her sister was apparent in the first page.
When she did act it turned out to be a very loving thing between sisters fulfilling both their desires.
Over all your writing was excellent and your story well told.
This is a fantastic story, the love between the two sisters was enough to make someone cry, looking forward to reading more of your posts :)
Sorry, but I was bored, and Andrea was just your usual depressed lesbian. I have yet to meet a happy, upbeat lesbian.
The buildup of this story was very nice. Incredibly hot read.
You did a good job portraying their emotions. Great story. Would be interesting to see how things might progress if you decide to continue it.
u really did well on emotions!! seriously i like this story :)
very cute. nice build up. no grammar issues. Great job. I would love to see thing continued. :-)
Tis was a beautiful story about 2 sisters who were very close. Female authors have a certain talent for the inclusion of love and other such emotions in their stories. Yours is no acception. I am assuming you are a woman because of this. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to your next installment.
I am a guy, though I will take that as a compliment to my writing given the context.
Mannnn this is your third story I've read and I love every single one of them. You might be my favourite author on here.
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Beautifully written. I'm amazed at how blurry the lines between sisterly love and sexual desire become; it definitely has a good buildup.
i loved this story. i am sorry that it ended as i would like to read more of their love for each other. Thanks for the mental visual.
A lovely story that turns out wonderfully! It'd be great to read more of it... Thank you!
I think I actually read this story maybe a couple of years ago and it amazes me that it was actually written by you!
... and it was even better than the first time.
The love Andrea has for her baby sis has grown into something very special, and it's gratifying that Lindsay's was strong enough to allow her to understand what her sister has been going through.
It's a new direction for each of them, born of that love and passion, and bound to grow even more.
Loved the way it was written, and voted 5 Stars the first time I finished it.
Wish I could vote again!
Andrea, related to the readers what compulsive love can ultimately lead too. At a relatively young age her devotion to her young sister, evolved into a deep seated love; that as she later recognized that her sexual interest was sapphic yet more towards her sister.
What a complicated yet compassionate piece of writing.
5๐'s
Even though itโs so short, this story is one of your best. In spite of the x-rated nature of your stories, there is love and even a kind of purity running through them. I really appreciate the time you took to write them.
Great story. It's a bit short, but it should definitely be continued. You have become one of my favorite writers.
This was not only highly erotic, but it made me feel good too. Very well done. Like many others I feel like I got to know the sisters & was sorry it ended so soon.
Bill S.