Great story overall, I did like how the reader was "in the mix" of everything as we knew as much as Kevin did. But my only comments would be to reread your story before posting it. Minor grammer errors, but the point got across. Keep up the good work.
And when he gets loose, she's history. And if she's REALLY lucky, she doesn't end up in the hospital. Total lack of respect deserves reprisals.
This is one of my favorite stories. Nice descriptions and details, like the pop-top, and I like the verbal teasing language as well. Awesome.
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