All Comments on 'Foot Teased and Stroked TOO Much'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Minor Adjustments

Great story overall, I did like how the reader was "in the mix" of everything as we knew as much as Kevin did. But my only comments would be to reread your story before posting it. Minor grammer errors, but the point got across. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hell no.

And when he gets loose, she's history. And if she's REALLY lucky, she doesn't end up in the hospital. Total lack of respect deserves reprisals.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hot!

This is one of my favorite stories. Nice descriptions and details, like the pop-top, and I like the verbal teasing language as well. Awesome.

MissKay77MissKay77almost 11 years ago
Hot

Very hot story. Great details and domination. I liked it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice, I guess

Good story. I don't care much for dom or shoes. But all the feet talk had me pumping cum in minutes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

I freaking loved the story! Love that she used "key" words. That is totally a fantasy of mine!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
excellence

we need more stories on here where a girl ties up a guy, gags him, and makes him smell her high heels

eatb64eatb64about 3 years ago

Wonderful! Has the desired affect on me ! Thank you !!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great story. It reminds me of me and my childhood friend Shannon

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