by Lady Clarissa
Liked this a lot. The playful tone of the piece suited the content and I liked the receding first line of each stanza.
reminiscent of ten thousand other boring CUM poems on this website. IT is obvious you don't practice much, "Lady" because I feel if you actually tried, you could write a good poem....or is it ALL about little red ach--es. Also, your poems speak to the average IQ here which is barely 40.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and words. Knowing this lady I think that there is true longing being expressed here. In fact, I think I am becoming a bit jealous of Paul.